å The Hottie and the Fatty ó Download by ì Segunda L.

å The Hottie and the Fatty ó Download by ì Segunda L. The guy is a gigantic douche bag I ve read the first page only and I can t continue What an a hole.
It can be summarized as a giant piece of cheese straight from the anime world that needs major editing and to be replaced in the fan fiction genre Fiction generally speaking is nonsense, not real, fake A good fictional novel is an artfully written acceptable nonsense The author creates a world that the reader accept even if they both know it s not real This book is the antonym of a good fictional novel This author needs to know that things that are accepted in movies are not necessarily accepted in books A scene that is funny and totally acceptable in Naruto will probably make no sense in a book How does anyone anywhere just randomly land in a forest and climb a tree for the first time like it was just a freaking breeze No one ever You would have to climb the tallest tree in the forest in order to oversee your way out This book was a total waste of time If there s a se Well, there s a few hours of my life that I ll never get back Also, there will be spoilers in this review First, I want to say that I was entirely put off by the amount of spelling mistakes and grammatically errors I get it, there are some in every book you read, but the sheer amount in this book was kind of terrifying It very much read like it went from rough draft to ebook without any kind of finishing or editing The characters were dull, flat, and had absolutely no growth There was no character arc in this book Jared stayed a bastard all the way through and Samara well, I probably would have bullied her, too, if I m honest They were just bad characters Also, this book is sold as if there is some redemption arc for Jared There isn t It s also sold as i I was surprised I liked it Grammatical errors were an issue People are being too harsh on the reviews of this book however The ugly things the character said were realistic I have heard similar bullying as I was growing up I find it shocking that anyone would pick up a book with this title and think it s going to not have things in it that are not only going to offend but supposed to offend That s the point people He changes slowly throughout the book because of her and she evolves as well That is what makes for good reading The characters are growing up and reaching new depths, even the bully who started out pretty shallow at first glance I am unhappy that it is a series and did not even hint that it was until suddenly the book just stops at a point where continuation is necessary.
HorribleI just can t believe this book the things the main character said to the girl were just horrible I don t know what the author was think The things that he said to the girl are so horrible they are things that make a girl cause major depression, think about suicide or ruin all four year of a girl high school life There not just said an swept under the rug and then they magically fall in love Just think twice before reading I know I should of guess what this book would have been like by the tile I had read other books about heavier girl but none were ever this mean.
Gah This is one of those books that I started, but only finished because I couldn t look away The writing and grammar and even the content was a train wreck yet I couldn t stop staring.
The main idea of the story was so unrealistic Not because a hot guy can t like a fat girl, but because of how quickly he feels like he s in love with her and the fact that she forgives him for the way he acts No one should ever be treated like that or be suddenly so accepting of someone who did.
Besides the plot issues, gosh this thing needs an editor I feel like the book was taken straight off of Wattpad without any editing or even a glance over spoiler I m super glad she chose the right guy I m the end and that s what got it the extra star I was so afraid for most of the book that she would chose the wrong guy There s a set up for book two at the end, but I m not interested at all.
After Getting Slapped By His Girlfriend In Front Of Everyone, High School Basketball Team Captain Jared Kippling Needed Something To Vent Off Stress A Fat Girl In His Class Happened To Be The Receiver Of His Wrath But It Turned Out This Girl Was The Daughter Of One Of His Dad S Potential Business Client Jared S Dad Offered Him A Deal Befriend Fatty And Make A Good Impression On Her Father In Exchange For A Mercedes Benz He Had His Eyes Set On Befriending A Fatty Walk In The ParkA Jurassic Park What Jared Didn T Expect Was He Was Going To Be Caught In An Embarrassing Moment With Her In A Locker Room, Get Punched By Her Childhood Friend, Get Lost In A Forest With Her And Of Course, Falling In Love With Her Wasn T Part Of The Plan Either There was no character depth and it had stereotypical high school personas The plot line was predictable and hard to read at times Jared was overly cruel to Samara way too much in the beginning and I don t understand why the word fatty was repeated over and over again We got the picture.
Lastly, for all that is holy and readable, get an editor This had so many grammatical errors that it was hard to read at times If I didn t see the potential at all I wouldn t have finished it to begin with.
I understand all the bad reviews about that book The title is too placativ, the male protagonist is not the typical hero On the contrary, Jared is a jerk But he changes during the book and his character development is something good about the story At the end of the book he isnt a jerk any and Samaras looks dont annoy him any The book is different Thats what I liked the most I didnt think it would end like that.
I really wanted to like this book, but I didn t at ALL First, I couldn t feel for the characters, they had no depth Neither Jared or Samara changed during the book There was no development Second, the book description sells the book as a love story between Jared and Samara, SPOILER it wasn t at all The ending really sucked, it wasn t what I expected or wanted But I will say I liked the story s concept and the theme that everyone deserves love Overall I wish I didn t read it.

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